Tue 13 Jun 2006
I’ve updated Zombie Stories: The Vampire again, because I decided I didn’t like the original ending. If you’ve already read it, the changed ending begins at the top of page 41. Meh. I still should just leave it to percolate rather than try to edit so soon, but I realized over the weekend that Withrow was somehow lacking – or at least, this version of Withrow. When I played him he was generally a kinder person to people than he was to his own kind. It was harder to make that distinction in a short story, though, so Not-Nice Withrow had to be expressed somehow.
I totally wanted Withrow to eat her.
So did I, sort of, but sort of not.
Also, damn. Proofreading might be a good thing for me to do in the future.
I’m always happy to proofread!
Also, I’m ready for you to finish the Zombie stories so you can get to the Maybe a Story about a Vampire or Maybe Not that I sent you.
Greedy, I know!